Comment on my design

**nvictor** · 22 June 2007, 04:47 AM

I have finished a proposal for the front of an appliance box [I don't know if it is called that way though].
Based on what the website was proposing http://www.pyramid.de/en/products/oem/gallery.php, I was asked to do an artwork with our logo, VisionPBX, and has been sent a pdf layout in which to work.

The document is in pdf format, and I also left the white rectangle, which is for the power, reset, and other buttons [I have been told to do].

https://tiger.towson.edu/~knoagb1/vi.../proposal1.pdf

I have not done any design for about 5 months. So I'm open to any comment.

**a4hire** · 22 June 2007, 03:54 PM

Looks pretty good. So you work for VisionPBX ? or you are trying to do the design for them ?

**nvictor** · 22 June 2007, 04:36 PM

The product is called VisionPBX. And I did the logo for them. So anything they want the logo on, they ask me.

By the way, they didn't like my first try because I did not respect the original logo. That's why I have made these changes:

http://tiger.towson.edu/~knoagb1/vis...roposal1-8.pdf

**Albacore** · 23 June 2007, 09:15 AM

Yes I think it would work, it is simple and clean in its design and the only doubt I would have is will the reflection be seen when placed in the insert?

**nvictor** · 23 June 2007, 04:28 PM

@Albacore

can you explain what you mean?

**suunto** · 23 June 2007, 06:12 PM

is this the one you were doing ages ago?

http://www.talkgraphics.com/showthread.php?t=23699

**nvictor** · 23 June 2007, 06:31 PM

Suunto,
it's been a while. No it's not. You see, they have not chosen the company logo I did before because it's very hard to make a company change it's brand. They are still attached to it.

VisionPBX is a new product, so I was free in my doing