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  1. #1
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    Default 1#car

    My first atempt to make a realistic car pic
    Feel free to comment and give tips.

    I did some changes
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    Last edited by Patman; 11 February 2007 at 09:23 PM. Reason: adding a pic

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    Default Re: 1#car

    Welcome to the forum. Nice car, but I can see a couple of immediate issues.

    . The ground shadow appears to be in front of the vehicle, try sending it to the back.
    . In the areas between the body and the tyres, the white background is showing. This makes the car body appear flat. Try filling these areas with a dark shape behind the wheels to suggest that there is more behind, but it is in deep shadow.
    . The tyres appear transparent, or you have some semi-transparent shapes overlapping them.

    Otherwise, it's a great first attempt.
    Last edited by stratocast; 11 February 2007 at 10:04 AM. Reason: Correcting gibberish
    -- Bob

 

 

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