Originally Posted by
Ross Macintosh
WyldFisherLures: Writing 'There More Than Just Lures!' would be very unprofessional because it's bad English. It looks like you mean it to be: 'They're more than just lures!'. Whatever you do, you should check it with others (English teacher etc) before printing.
And if they are more than just lures then what are they? Do your lures do other things as well? I doubt it. What I'm suggesting is you really think about the meaning of your slogans -- don't just pick one on the basis that it sounds to you.
Regards, Ross
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