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    My 1st full flash site finished (ish) any constructive feedback on design?layout or anything else would be most welcome.


    http://www.morganharrisarchitects.com/mha_content.html


    cheers

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    Default Re: any constructive feedback welcome

    Only a quick look very nice layout thumbnails etc. Just check your spelling of Michelin as in Michelin award as far as I know it is only one l.
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    Sadly, I didn't see any thumbnails, even after entering the site - just one largish graphic. :-(
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    Quote Originally Posted by pauland View Post
    Sadly, I didn't see any thumbnails, even after entering the site - just one largish graphic. :-(
    click on projects button Paul
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    Quote Originally Posted by parahandy View Post
    click on projects button Paul
    LOL - what projects button? Attached is all I get..
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    Hold on give me 5 minutes, forgot to add something to center the page in firefox

    manny

    ok added some code in the head tag (must say thanks to Egg bramell for that as it was a google search for a work around that brought me to this site and his solution) Thanks fella
    Last edited by manny2k; 01 December 2006 at 07:31 PM. Reason: missed text off
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    Must be firefox.
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    Hi Manny - yes that did the trick.

    Here's my constructive criticism..

    First of all, it's an excellent site and one of the best of it's kind I've seen -elegant, functional and fitting to the subject. Top class.

    The opening page (beyond the loader) shows a 3D render and I'm really surprised that it was chosen as the first view for the site. I would have used a photograph. The reason I say that is that in comparison with many other architectural renderings I've seen, the ones on the site aren't of the best quality and I don't think this opening 3D render is doing the clearly excellent architectural work justice.

    The site has my favourite hate and no-no : "Under Construction". All web sites are evolving and "under construction", so why, oh why put in a more section if there is no more to show? When you have more just add it in!

    A tiny niggle is where once a project is chosen - for example "Camberwell Development 001", I see the thumbnails and the project title above; I just want to click on that project title to give me back the list of projects to choose from. I think the reason is that the white bars top and bottom are making me think of the Flash Concertina component. It's just a little thing that gets me every time.

    Lets be honest - my niggles are tiny things and this is a superb site. Well done. I'm sure that your clients will be delighted.

    Paul
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    Well done on the flash site

    I have see some flash sites before, some gimmicky ones and some good ones. But I can say that i am impressed with the site, Professional and Clear.

    Nice touch with the square box that follows the mouse
    Last edited by Whizz Kid; 01 December 2006 at 09:33 PM.
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    Nice pictures and nice layout, but too small font sizes.
    I'm working with a resolution of 1920 x 1200 px and it's hard to read the text.

    Regards,
    Remi
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