Logo Direction Please

[OklaEd]

Hello gentlemen ... and ladies. I humbly ask your assistance and guidance in evaluating my un-inspired efforts toward this project. I can't seem to get excited about it ... my creative juices have dried up.

Logo for junior disc golf foundation www.jdgf.org which raises money through tournaments to give scholarships to participants.

Pat me on the back ... rip it to shreds ... or point me in a totally different direction. Just be yourself ... honestly!

[masque]

For what its worth I feel that there are three main objects to look at which are waiting in a queue to be looked at.
The figure and the net(?) should be closer together, the JDGF above, below or behind to tie them together perhaps and then the wording could be anywhere that looks good once the main three elements are functioning together.
Whatever the solution you come up with, there's always a better one which occurs the day after its gone to print. Thats what makes logo design interesting.

derek

Derek

[OklaEd]

Hello gentlemen ... and ladies. I humbly ask your assistance and guidance in evaluating my un-inspired efforts toward this project. I can't seem to get excited about it ... my creative juices have dried up.

Logo for junior disc golf foundation www.jdgf.org which raises money through tournaments to give scholarships to participants.

Pat me on the back ... rip it to shreds ... or point me in a totally different direction. Just be yourself ... honestly!

[Bob Hahn]

Ed,

No need to ask really, since this is what you asked for in your post.

Glad to have helped.

-Bob.

[John Rayner]

that is a hard one Ed... gimme a while to think and maybe I can come up with something. These look too... ummmm... Like drawings, not logos...

Maybe just the disk and the net. with the disk as the background and the words around the outside?

[Grafixman]

Logos, do enough of them and they start looking like alphabet soup.
When unsure, Google it! I typed in disc golf and looked at what others are using. The first site on the list looked like a modified NBA logo. The next looked like a Nike ripoff. See the trend? Maybe you could modify something familiar. Just don't be to obvious.
OK, I'm not being helpful...

[OklaEd]

I agree gentlemen ... #7 seems to be the best option ... and I really like what Bob has done with it.

Bob,
Is is alright to incorporate your changes as a option to offer my "client". Obviously, his decision will be final ... but I think this will work the best for what he is looking for.

BTW ... this is another in a long line of pro-bono work I do. The junior disc golf foundation is a non-profit set up specifically for scholarships ... and therefore has virtually no budget. Most everything done for the organization (including graphic work) is volunteer.

[John Rayner]

Hi Ed,

I think #7 is the best so far. The disk (Background)on #8 is too complex to make a good logo.

[OklaEd]

Thank you gentlemen ... your comments and suggestions are well received. Here are revisions based on some of them.

[Mickie]

Ed,

I think #7 is very eye catching. I like the movement.

Mickie