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Hi again, gang! Thanks for letting me post my work here for critique! It's much appreciated!
This is a new t-shirt design entitled "Been Through The Fire", created with Xara 10 and PS4. Would love some feedback!
BTW, there actually is no black background on the design - the potential buyer can pick that out him/her self when choosing a t-shirt or poster, etc. I just added it to show the graphics better.
Thanks!
Looks real good Nancy.
Thanks, but..."Nancy"?
Sorry, Toonicon I thought foom a previous post that your name is Nancy.
Lol, no worries.
Him and her. You left out They. :)
Yellowbird is Nancy Larry ;)
That's what I thought thanks EggQuote:
Originally Posted by Egg Bramhill
Okay, now that we got the secret identities sorted out ;))
I added a bit of flame to the text in my design. Again, feedback would be welcome, and thanks!
the flame on the text is good, gives continuity to the eye of the viewer, and you didn't overdo it :)
I like the design and would imagine many would want it on a T-shirt. One suggestion: leave out most wrinkles on the nose.
We have fire and tigers and a powerful, positive message, with cute, bright eyes. Not being an artist, I can't begin to suggest options, but as an observer, the eyes look like they don't belong.
Let me repeat, 'Not being an artist' several times :)
I agree with Boy - the nose looks a bit 'punched' - chris mentioned the eyes.. maybe the pointed ends are out of style with the rest.....
I have just noticed the tail, and now i have it looks wrong, like an afterthought.... it's too high up, not because it couldn't be there, but because you cannot see it flowing behind the tiger and so it looks out of place to me 'just appearing' where it does....
Hmmm...this design might be a fail, then. It happens.
Thank you for the honest feedback!
Toonicorn, that was not at all the conclusion of my feedback, nor -- I believe -- that of the others'. It's a great design and only some tweaks were suggested.
Oh, no worries, Boy. I am always grateful for feedback. It's just that if multiple things are wrong with a design, I always weigh whether to go forward with it.Quote:
Originally Posted by Boy
Now that I think of it though, it wouldn't be difficult to make the changes suggested. Everything's on layers, after all. As far as the tail's concerned, I can easily remove it. Likewise the nose wrinkles (which were meant to suggest a bit of a snarl). The eyes could be fixed too.
I will do a refreshed design and post it here later. Again, THANK YOU for the feedback guys, and rest assured that I'm never offended by your replies. I'm grateful for it! Please don't hesitate to tell me your honest opinions! :)
design might be a fail, then. It happens.Quote:
Originally Posted by Toonicorn
I wouldn't consider that a fail, actually it's very nice.
Hi again, gang!
Well, I've made some changes to the image. See what you think. Again, I do appreciate your honest feedback, and thanks!
I like this better, thank you for doing that and posting.
A winner, Toonicorn!
agreed that is much better :)
Thanks again, everyone! Your constructive criticism is very much appreciated! :)
you are welcome - hope it goes well :)