hi all
NewEra
is my site
i like to know your comments and thoughts
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hi all
NewEra
is my site
i like to know your comments and thoughts
Loads quickly, easy to understand and navigate. There's a few to many fonts in there for my taste though.
jwhitham: thank you for your response :)
Hello NewEra,
I agree with jwhitham - too many fonts makes it distracting. I also can't help but feel that your colour scheme is not very business like? It's also a bit difficult to determine what your "business" is - there's a little bit of everything in there - and nothing really shines...
You could also use some cell-padding in there, some text is a bit stuffed.
I also find it to be a bit off-putting is that you have copied all the text from other websites (copyright issues)... You logo page text is a straight copy from Logoworks.
It's also a bit difficult to determine what your "business" is
our business is the WEB
I also find it to be a bit off-putting is that you have copied all the text from other websites
i'm gonna check it
thanks for your comment
we've made a demo for a client
(dj-sound system-light effect - etc ..)
he liked it very much :)
it's a flash site as client requested
and now before going to the next step
i wish to know your opinion about it
Mirage
Cool.
One thing bugging me is that the mouse over area for the links are a bit small. Had to move the mouse several times over the links beside the big musical note just to have it change to a finger cursor. Make it bigger and rectangular, not separated by the space between the text lines.
modifying the links is what i'm doing now
I likw it. Its really neat.
thank you patpat
New Era,
I have to say I looked at your website after you commented on mine and I think it looks really professional. The business is clear... it is web design and I really do think it looks good.
Grahamb
http://www.bettscomputers.com
thank you grahamb
good work
http://www.gag-is.com/upload/main1.htm
new design for an IT company
what do you think? :)
open for any comments
thank you
Hi,
I like it because it is a unusual design with the company logo devider in the middle. Even the speed is good. The graphic is clear and good looking.
But you should try to change it when clicking on another page.
I mean for the index the logo devider is doing great, but if it remains for every page, it will be desturbing.
In my opinion it would be difficult to read and focus on the products of the company with the logo devider settled big in the middle taking all of my attention.
Not really coming up to the eyes attention is the navbar on left side bottom. (site map/Links/Add URL/Forum)
If the browser is 800x600 and you have one more as the standard bars on top of your browser (e.g. canon print bar, google bar,...), then you will need to scroll down to see it.
No one really gives a lot of attention to the bottom lines.
Idea:
why not try to let the logo devider in the middle of the page animated?
Let it start in the middle and then move to the left or right side of the page where it will remain still until a new page is opened.
You even could get the bottom bar into the small bar below the nice girl with the laptop.
Pathfinder
I think the logo bar running through the middle doesn't work - it's far too dominant and distracting. The logo should be clearly visible but not distract from the main message on the page. The split page design is also going to be potentially restricting - You can't have one large central theme on a page, you'll always be looking to have content pairs. Even if left and right panes are related, the viewer is continually distracted - having to cross the huge central bar to get from one side to another.
I hope that's a reasonable comment.
Paul
pathfinder: thank you for your advices,
i'm taking it step by step
i changed the girl picture to enter new colors to the layout
what do you think?
.. it clashes badly with the rest of the colour scheme..Quote:
Originally Posted by NewEra
it's not done yet :)
but we need reviews
http://www.gag-is.com/upload/
P.S: don't evaluate the logo or the empty pages as they are not finish yet :rolleyes:
You should try and write your own material, instead of stealing from other websites. Some of the text is even ripped - spelling mistakes and all...
As for a review - the style of writing is not coherent - probably, because your are stealing from many types of websites.
we decide to have new site with new concept
I need you to review these new 2 templates of the new design
which one do you prefer?
http://www.gag-is.com/review/index.htm
http://www.gag-is.com/review/index100.htm
>>> Merge of similar threads >>>
NewEra, please keep your "learning web design" posts in one thread. It will make it easier for people to see what you are up to.
New Age,
I have been looking through all of your designs, and I can't say anything else but : have a good look at general design rules and colour schemes. The sites you came up with are not really doing you any favours if you want to get any further with it.
It is all clunky, un-coordinated, links/buttons not working, stolen stuff (like Risto already said before) and basically I wouldn't want to have your company touch my company webimage. Free webbuilder stuff is what it looks like.
Your own site is a shopwindow that should show off your smooth and professional designing skills. Sadly in your window I see amateurism...
I can't say I am a real genius at designing, but I do know what would sell and what most certainly won't. I am sure you can do much better once you get in the swing of things though. So I do admire your persistance in coming up with sites. BUT.... come with your OWN stuff, or at least tell people where you found it...
Reading back it all sounds a bit harsh. It is not meant that way though, it is meant as an opinion that I formed while browsing through...
It is only fair to comment on MY work now, so I'll put some of my work here.
Go and butcher, because I too need to learn lots and lots and even more lots....
http://www.dianemarelli.co.uk
http://www.witchdom.com
http://dedicated-it-services.co.uk
http://www.virtual-services-ltd.co.uk
http://www.ccs-conservatorycleaning.co.uk
Later!!
Rick
Hey Rick,
I noticed that Marceli Woman Photo was a tad jagged around the edges. It might be better to mask that out to make it smoother.
There are several good photograph masking tutorials around, one even gets down to the hair level. :)
Ta James :)
I will have a look at it and see if I can smooth the woman up :))) I bet though she'd want a new site by now as this one is from ...what.. two years ago..?
You call this a TAD jagged ??? ( just looked) I'd Better offer her an update...
Later !!
Rick