Hi, all!
I just finished creating this Autumn/Halloween t-shirt and poster design. I'd love your feedback on it. Thanks!
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Hi, all!
I just finished creating this Autumn/Halloween t-shirt and poster design. I'd love your feedback on it. Thanks!
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It's a lovely image with many wonderful elements. The only thing is that my eyes don't find a focal point in the design. I find the brightly colored elements, such as the glow, the leaves and the gloves a bit distracting. Perhaps the lettering could be a bit more separate from the actual drawing.
I've sold a few tees with this image, so I guess I'm happy with it. Thank you for your commentary, Boy.
For myself, I first see the pumpkin, then my eyes rationalize that the pumpkin stands in for the O in the word Coming. My eyes then travel down the arm to the headless horseman. I don't see the same focal issue.
I too would use some other colors and treatments . But I can chalk that up to different designers and my clients and/or target markets.
Great image. No problems here.
The headless horseman, love it toonicorn.
Thanks for the input, everyone! Much appreciated!