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Hey, I changed my login name from Vitality to my regular name, figured it looked a little more "professional":D just in case any of you wanted to know! Wasn't very sure of putting this up yet, especially after Balazs's amazing work ("McLaren")! But I decided to put it up anyway seeing as how there has been a lot of posts lately and I'm looking for a lot of advice and/or comments! Thanks for your posts, hope you enjoy
Steve Newport
[This message was edited by Steve Newport on January 23, 2001 at 07:31 PM.
[This message was edited by Steve Newport on January 23, 2001 at 07:32 PM.]
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A different style and very nice Steve. Was this a trace as well or a “free hand” rendering?
Bob C.
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Yes, this was as well a trace! I don't right now, nor may I ever have the talent for that kind of extensive "free hand"! Thanks for the compliments
Steve Newport
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No apologies needed for this one! From my experience cars are the hardest thing to illustrate. Each one has their own character and if you get a couple of lines or angles off by much they don't look like the intended model at all.
Great job!
Dennis Cox
<a href=http://www.inconnect.com/~dennisco>Carillus Design</a>
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Steve, your prowler purrs! You've done a really great job with your blends to sculpt the car.
I'm certainly not critical of what you've done but I do have a few comments for consideration. Notice how the body and other metal work has a rather "soft" look? If you wanted it to look harder and more metallic I think what you could try is adding some reflections. That would be like giving it a coat of wax. Part of what makes Belazs' McLaren illustration so successful is all those reflections he rendered. Similarly, the great cars in the Xara clipart examples all incorporate reflections. I presume you still have the reference photo you used. Analyze its reflections and try adding a few to your Prowler - I think you'll find the effort worthwhile.
Regards, Ross
<a href=http://www.designstop.com/>DesignStop.Com</a>
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I think what Ross is saying is that it lacks shine. Kinda gives the appearance that it's painted in flat purple.
Add some Shine Plus Reflections & you'd have a portfolio piece there.
Good luck. Looking good so far. 10-20% to go...
Ww
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Thanx a lot for the advice, I know exactly what you mean and I will definentally experiment with it and hopefully post the final result soon. Just adding the finishing touches to another project that I will post soon but will probably be adding more reflection to that too! Thanks again
Steve Newport