Eric;
One thing that seems to work really well for the learning processes of people on this forum is to post their work (as you have done here) and ask for criticism and suggestions. Even infrequent but interested dabblers like me can offer input that may be helpful (I hope!), as I will now proceed to do.
I really like the yellow in the petals of your flower. I also think you have done a good job with the 3-dimensionality of the fruit, especially the plum. Also, your placement and creation of shadows looks very convincing. A couple of places where I think you might want to apply more attention would be the edges of things, such as the flower and the fruit, as well as the use of highlight sharpness/feathering to creat texture. For example, I think the edges of your objects (flower and fruit) opposite the highlights/shadows need some rounding. And the apple highlight, for instance, should perhaps be brighter and sharper to show the apple's smooth texture.
These are ideas from a total non-expert, but I hope you find them helpful. I suspect the real experts here would be willing to give you some constructive input if you ask for it. I do not intend in any way to put hardworking art instructors out of a job, by the way; I'm just thinking that this forum could do more for you than it is already doing, if you ask for the help.
Regards,
Glen
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