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  1. 23 July 2016, 03:09 PM #1
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    Default before and after

    Think I've made an improvement here, any thoughts??
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  2. 23 July 2016, 04:03 PM #2
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    Definite improvement Tim.
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    Hi Tim, nice work.

    I see the mountains are more defined and the foreground more prominent with bigger cattle.

    I think the original is more mystical, but nice job following Gary's advice.

    I think making it more defined just alters the emotional response slightly.
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  4. 23 July 2016, 07:18 PM #4
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    The contrast deepen and element arrangements do add dynamics. Agreed.
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  5. 25 July 2016, 03:15 PM #5
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    Default Re: before and after

    Thanks all. I much prefer the new one, it's now closer to what I saw in my minds eye when I started. Not my favorite piece, but I'm calling it done.
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