Burger Spot

**Psaumure** · 26 July 2015, 02:11 AM

Ron. Your work Disappointing? I think not. I like your wire frame but I too look forward to seeing the colored in image. Based on all your other work, I thing it will be a smashing success.

Paul

**Ron Duke** · 26 July 2015, 04:22 PM

Thanks Paul. I'm having trouble with the color scheme of the burger building itself. I want it to be representative of the period, but I don't want an exact copy of a specific business.
I know GP, who has done much for me in the past, has very kindly encouraged me to go to school, but it isn't possible for me to do for a number of reasons I won't go into.

I still have things I want to add to the drawing, but one step at a time. After that, I'll post the color drawing and look forward to critiques to help me learn more and give me ideas and a chance to grow.

**wizard509** · 27 July 2015, 03:01 PM

Originally Posted by Psaumure

Ron. Your work Disappointing? I think not. I like your wire frame but I too look forward to seeing the colored in image. Based on all your other work, I thing it will be a smashing success.

Paul

Agreed!

**Ron Duke** · 27 July 2015, 04:09 PM

Thanks teach! I intend to start on the waitress, but keep spotting things I don't like. Plus I try to anticipate possible critiques from all you great supporters and making more adjustments. This is a great learning experience and I really appreciate the observations and critiques I'm getting!

**gray** · 27 July 2015, 04:28 PM

I know it's going to be a masterpiece, Ron. That's what's great about TG, everyone helps to make it a better illustration.

**Ron Duke** · 27 July 2015, 07:03 PM

Originally Posted by gray

I know it's going to be a masterpiece, Ron. That's what's great about TG, everyone helps to make it a better illustration.

Well, like you said in the other post, "You always see stuff that you missed or needs to be fixed, or that you left out AFTER you post it. sheeeesh!

Anyway, I'm going to start on the waitress now. This should be interesting!

**Gare** · 28 July 2015, 11:57 AM

OMTS ! (Oh my Thick Shake!)

Ron, if you posted the wireframe in a real gallery, it'd win a prize!

In awe,

Gary

**Ron Duke** · 28 July 2015, 03:09 PM

Gary my buddy!

**Jay Mc** · 29 July 2015, 05:38 PM

awesome retro!!!!! anyway, can't wait for the full renders... well done so far!

**Ron Duke** · 31 July 2015, 12:07 AM

Thanks Jay.
Well, the work is complete in as all the elements I wanted in it are there. However, there is a lot of drawing aspects that, for me, are less than quality work. It's not that I haven't put the time in, it's that I just can't seem to figure out how to do it, i.e. drawing people. I hate drawing people because I can't seem to get the nuances down that make a person look like a person and not a crappy drawing of a person.
Anyway, I will revisit this later because there's always something I didn't see that needs correcting or cleaning up.
Oh, and the food graphics are mine.