More Ice Hockey Cartoons - well one more...

[David Strover]

Hi Folks,

I haven't posted much on here recently due to a lot of work I've been doing (mainly Xara stuff for family and friends - including a leaflet that will by used in an Emergency Department for NHS!)

Anyhoo I thought I'd have another pop at my 'cartoon ice hockey penalties' which I was thinking of putting on tee-shirts.

These are from original pencil drawings and then hand-traced and created in Xara - the trouble is I think they are a bit 'flat' and have no real personality. Still I'll keep trying.

David

[Ron Duke]

I like the facial expressions David.

[David Strover]

I've got some advice from a proper cartoonist (who makes their living doing this, but much better obviously) and altered it per their suggestions and added a few bits that I think makes it a bit better. I'm still not fully happy with it but I'm getting there...

[gray]

I think it looks great, David.

[csehz]

from a proper cartoonist (who makes their living doing this, but much better obviously)

You are also doing it really very well

[hseiken]

It reminds me of Ren & Stimpy. I like Ren & Stimpy.

[David Strover]

Thanks for the kind remarks folks - I must ultra critical as I never seem happy with anything I produce.

Anyway here's the next...there will be lull in these, you'll be pleased to know, because I'm halfway through another ice-hockey project which is taking my time!