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  1. #11
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    Default Re: 1st Website opinions?

    Quote Originally Posted by boomish View Post
    Thats really interesting thanks Arpeggio, ok I shall try and design something specific.
    No problem. Looking at your site I think there's loads of stuff you could make video of.

  2. #12
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    Harwich, Essex, England
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    Default Re: 1st Website opinions?

    Hi Alan, I don't know how to say this other than bluntly. Your site doesn't work for me. Your site should be about YOU. You are very obviously very talented and multi-disciplined and a leader within your industry.

    However your site says virtually nothing about yourself, your experience, your skills or expertise. You have links on the Discography page that is ultra impressive as a CV but doesn't say a thing about your input to these productions. Similarly the Biog link leads to a very sexy mouse over link page but just seems to lead to merchandising web sites. Why?

    Not wanting to be hyper critical but if I was searching for the services you are providing I'd want to see more about YOU. For example your home page has:

    Producer
    Mixer
    Engineer

    I'd like to see these as menu items that lead to pages explaining your obvious experiences within these fields.
    Egg

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  3. #13
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    Location
    Dhaka, Bangladesh
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    Default Re: 1st Website opinions?

    Hello nice to meet you boomish. I'm new here. By the way, I can't see your 2nd link due to not found error. Hope you will fix soon.

  4. #14
    Join Date
    Sep 2014
    Location
    france
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    Default Re: 1st Website opinions?

    @boomish: Hey Alan, your website is well design, sounds professional. But I think you've already make your choice as #2nd link is not working anymore, and your official URL is showing #1 link. Good choice anyway!

  5. #15

    Default Re: 1st Website opinions?

    Alan,
    Its a pleasure to address a person with a record of such accomplishments. I think your first attempt at creating a website is quite good.
    Please dont be disheartened by the helpful and insightful comments. I believe everyone here wants to be of help.
    Keep at it. Youre a very capable individual.
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