Still Life - tweaked

[Crow Haven]

Beautiful!
---Maya

[s.winders]

Thanks Maya


Stu.

[jens g.r. benthien]

Now it looks much more 'natural' with the perspective.

jens g.r. benthien
designer
http://www.sacalobra.de

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[s.winders]

Thanks jens

[s.winders]

Final tweaks ...nah I promise...

Stu.

[Crow Haven]

Nice improvement on the brass candlesticks material and refectivity/shadows! The bottom horizontal section of frame molding shows grain pattern offsets/joints on the left end and right end---to my eyes. The mitered corners are left far apart intentionally?

I prefer the previous canvas appearance and colorations to this new textured one...the reason why (just my opinion though---please don't shoot me!)is mainly the texturing which seems a bit too heavy, and the lines on the mountains to the right especially are too prominent/distracting/not needed....the sun's colors also became too muddy and flattened through the texturing. But those things are just preferences of my own.

Nice work!

Maya

[s.winders]

Thanks Maya.



Nah I like the impressionistic type style of the canvas.



The gamma is not Windows either so try adjusting the levels a bit and see then if it looks the same.



The frame edges are actually in line I checked a dozen times,its the shadowing on the raised part of the edges I think.


Stu.

[Gary David Bouton]

Stu--

I think it's taking on a quality that is both photorealistic and painterly.


My Best,

-g-

Gary David Bouton
Gary@GaryDavidBouton.com
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[s.winders]

Thanks Gare


I just wanted to see if I could push it that little bit further before putting it in the "no doubt will be re worked again at a later date folder".....


Stu.