Re: Five Stones beveled glass entryway
Nice work, but I see a few places that could use some improvement, one of which is the shadow at the left side is almost the same value as the wood trim and gives a false impression of that the glass panes to the far left angles in. I guess it's how you see it at the time or which part you happen to be looking at because above looks correct. It's just where the wood meets the (outdoor carpet?) that causes the problem for me. There are a few other places that could use some sparkle, and I was wondering about the brass plates at the base of the doors, could that reflect what is in front a little or at least not be rendered so flat, maybe is really is but that is an opportunity to (cheat a little) for pictorial interest. Don't get me wrong but I think you did a great job.
One other point, I am wondering about is; is there a reason the weave of the (carpet) is horizontal and not say parallel to the entrance area or perpendicular to it? Maybe this isn't your call but, perhaps add a spot of color to the center ellipse of each door to help break up the sea of gray.
Larry a.k.a wizard509
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