Mitsubishi KI 15 "Babs"

[TKI]

[A Wrigley]

Very nice work TKI

[TKI]

Thanks Wrigley.

It is worth it all the more when I see the production of both you and your pears.

[wizard509]

Very nice work TKI.

[Psaumure]

Very well done TKI. The only thing I could suggest is to add a little shadow between the front cone and props. I like it, it's very clean and well done. Keep up the good work, I look forward to seeing more.

Paul

[TKI]

Thanks for the advise Paul.

Always appreciated.

I am guessing thay you mean on the upper portion of the lower prop just below the spinner?

Tim

[Psaumure]

Just a little shadow where body parts overlap. i used a black shape with a bit of feather to add some depth between the front cone and body to give you an example of what i was talking about. great looking plane but even better with some depth. let me know what you think.

Paul

[TKI]

Yes. I see what you mean.

Is it OK to "correct" and resubmit?

[Psaumure]

Absolutely. This is the best way to improve your skills. I have received lots of great feedback and suggestions from many of the artiest here on this forum. i have updated many projects that i thought were finished and reposted the end results.

[TKI]

New and improved version attached.

Took out the KAMAKAZE.

It took away from the image somewhat.

Thanks Paul, will incorporate your lesson in the next project.