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    Default Looking for a critique

    I just built http://www.carsonrods.com and am looking for some reviews. Please let me know what I can do to make this site more visually appealing.

    Thanks.

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    Default Re: Looking for a critique

    Welcome to TalkGraphics

    I think your site is OK but it lacks drama. Everything on your home page is of equal importance. I would suggest using one dramatic close up shot that fills most of the screen instead five same size photos.

    On your bio page, Your headline is too big (font size) and so you have one word on the second line. Make the text a bit smaller or remove the bold face.

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    Default Re: Looking for a critique

    A fatal error popped up on the Toyota Rat Rod page when i visited it.
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    Soquili
    a.k.a. Bill Taylor
    Bill is no longer with us. He died on 10 Dec 2012. We remember him always.
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    Default Re: Looking for a critique

    This design would be perfect to create and improve in Xara Web Designer MX.

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