New to Xara...Looking for critique for logo

[Big Frank]

Me too, please do show us!

[misstheresa2009]

Okay,

Here is the new logo that I created. I actually got the idea from Berat who I wish to thank personally. You were very kind to offer me your idea. Please note that I am not good with designing logos and I needed as much help as I could get.

Here it is:



Please tell me what you think

[gwpriester]

Welcome to TalkGraphics where the reviews are often mixed.

I like your second design (in the first set you posted) with the sans serif type. Nice mixture of fonts.

[juergen]

Well, I personally like your first set much more than the second. The only change I would do is try to make it a bit easier to read. To see what I mean I did a small modification to your original one. If "new" is mandatory it won't work though :=) Oh, and I just noticed I forgot to close the gap after Dee's ...

Juergen

[color]

I like the first version. But the color appears a little dark~