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    I made it this wikend

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    I made it this wikend

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    Nice work, and welcome to the board.

    I wish there was a lamp post right in front of those botas, so i could see a 'hint' of detail. Ya know... something that could be the "focal point" in the sceene. Right now, nothing stands out enough on its own to be the main focus.

    Nice ombience in the bg too.


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    something like this!!!

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    Ya exactly!
    Except i was thinking it would illuminate the boats somewhat, since they appear to be in the center focal point of the scene.

    My eyes are definately 'drawn' to the boats... but i just can't see enough of their detail to 'hold' my focus there.

    See what i mean?

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    Hows thic picture?

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    Very nice


    Maybe just a little bit to saturated.



    Stu.

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    simply put... awesome I likes this alot... due to the heat out here in our part of the globe our grass is brownish eh, so this just picks me right up thnx and keep em com'n eh... wunderffullllll

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    Ya i like this alot too Waldo. Great composition.

    I agree with Stu too though about the saturation. Just bring it into PS and try desaturating it a little.

    Good stuff!

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