Check This one....
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Looking good http://www.talkgraphics.com/images/smilies/smile.gif
I think your lighting could use some tweaking though.
I agree with Kiwi...the scene is dramatic and wondrous, but the lighting makes it a bit confusing. I don't know where to direct my eye...
My Best,
Gare
I think the lighting is very much like early morning.
Soquili