Tweaked the metal and the wall paper and added a snuffbox and did some re arranging http://www.talkgraphics.com/images/smilies/smile.gif
Gare cheers for the wallpaper http://www.talkgraphics.com/images/smilies/biggrin.gif
Stu.
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Tweaked the metal and the wall paper and added a snuffbox and did some re arranging http://www.talkgraphics.com/images/smilies/smile.gif
Gare cheers for the wallpaper http://www.talkgraphics.com/images/smilies/biggrin.gif
Stu.
Tweaked the metal and the wall paper and added a snuffbox and did some re arranging http://www.talkgraphics.com/images/smilies/smile.gif
Gare cheers for the wallpaper http://www.talkgraphics.com/images/smilies/biggrin.gif
Stu.
however, it appears to me that you've used a short focal length for your camera. Try to set it to 80 or 100 mm, pull the camera back to get the same view. Reason: the candle lights appear to be oval - an obvious sign that you are using a wide angle lens ;-}
jens
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candle light? um, I don't see any flames?
anyhoo, looks much better with the metal container... everything is modeled nicely, I just think there is too much cherry glow , though this one is much better than the first in this respect... but yea, too much red... other than that no complaints at all, looks great Stu http://www.talkgraphics.com/images/smilies/smile.gif
Gidget,
<BLOCKQUOTE class="ip-ubbcode-quote"><font size="-1">quote:</font><HR> candle light? um, I don't see any flames? <HR></BLOCKQUOTE>
Hm, I didn't mean the flames, but the metal objects that hold the candles - help me, how do you call these? I tried the online translator - it says 'candle owner' which is definitely wrong. Candle stand should be the expression, but I'm not sure. Unfortunately I can't ask my wife - she attends a meeting tonight ;-}
Any suggestions? I'm eager to learn. What I meant is: the feet of the candle stands are looking oval, as if they are pulled to a center in the image.
Holy Lord, I think I surrender at this point :-/
jens
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They're called "candlestick holders".
My Best,
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Nice, very nice work Stu.
I really like it. I agree with jens on the candelsticks, they give away a wide-angle lens. One other crit to a very nice work: I don't get the impression that there's glass over the picture in the frame. Maybe add a glass poly with a small amount of reflection (and some arbitrary reflection map) to up the realism a bit. The texture mapping on the frame is pulling a little as well, but I don't think a non-cg'er would notice much.
Great work Stu!
Brett
Thanks guys http://www.talkgraphics.com/images/smilies/biggrin.gif
jens - Ya your right that camera setting has to go.Needs more shelf as well I feel.
Gidge - Cherry red huh,I see orange glow,might be gamma maybe.
Brett - I didnt want to have glass over the painting I wanted the old world feel.It also has a hand painted bump map which has brush strokes which are semi realistic in the areas where more paint would build up.
The wood texture is looking a bit pixelated isnt it,might have to try a better res one http://www.talkgraphics.com/images/smilies/smile.gif
Ok back for tweaks I feel.
Stu.
Hey Stu... you are right in that the glow is sort of orangish, perhaps it was a carry over affect from viewing the first worx... which did have a cherry sort of glow to it... and naw, I doubt it is the gamma, your gold comes in pretty nicely... though I dunno, sure the mac to pc thing...
I see it in the match package more than elsewhere, the matck stick shows as should, as does everything els... must be a carry over... my apologies if this is just me and my wonky eys http://www.talkgraphics.com/images/smilies/biggrin.gif
So the match cover is oranish as in apposed to cherry pinkish?
tweaks... haha, tell me about it... I do more tweaking the tweaks than carving out new stuff... ugggg. is there no end to tweaking ? hahahahaha
More tweaks,much happeir with this version http://www.talkgraphics.com/images/smilies/smile.gif
Nope your right Gidge it is reddish,but now its blue http://www.talkgraphics.com/images/smilies/biggrin.gif .....
Crits please........I keep missing stuff now so its all helpful http://www.talkgraphics.com/images/smilies/biggrin.gif
Stu.